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January 15
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Canon
Canon EOS REBEL T3
1/49 second
F/4.0
55 mm
3200
Jan 13, 2013, 12:38:07 PM
EF-S55-250mm f/4-5.6 IS II
Embettered by PicMonkey. http://www.picmonkey.com
22mm
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:iconlemonsterattack:
please comment, :+fav:, and critique!!
thanks!
photo © me
:iconskeletonmob:
You have a good start to a picture. The main thing I would recommend would be to get rid of whatever stuff is in foreground, if at all possible. I can tell that the focal point is the lights, so try and emphasize them as much as possible. Have your viewers focus on the main subject of the picture, not everything else. Don't have a complicated background, and don't have anything in the foreground either, unless it somehow frames the focal point of your picture.

Also try out different color schemes and see how they turn out. This looks good in black and white, but it seems to me that it'll also look good in color. It's not too visually complicated, all the different elements complement each other, it looks like it'll translate well, but it's you're choice.

The main thing is just to work on that foreground area. So just work on that, and keep experimenting. Other than that, good job.

- SkeletonMob
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